Monday, April 1, 2013

war stories for third graders?


New York approves war-oriented reading textbooks for third-grade classrooms

Last Updated:9:33 AM, March 18, 2013
Posted:1:15 AM, March 18, 2013
Tales of war, bombs and abduction — coming to a third-grade classroom near you.
City and state education bureaucrats have given the green light to an English curriculum for elementary schools that includes picture books with startlingly realistic portrayals of war — to be read by 8-year-olds.
They include “The Librarian of Basra,” which contains drawings of fighter planes dropping bombs on a palm-tree-lined Middle Eastern town.
In another illustration, the protagonist looks worried, peering out a window at soldiers manning machine guns on a rooftop.
The terrified townsfolk wonder, “Who among us will die?” and “Will our families survive?”
Similarly, “Nasreen’s Secret School” depicts the abduction of a young man from his home in Afghanistan by soldiers and discusses Taliban rules that forbid women to go out in public alone.
“There’s no way in hell that I find it appropriate for third grade, let alone elementary school, on so many levels,” said a Queens elementary-school principal who was shown one of the books by colleagues outside the city.
“We don’t have to bring the message of war with it. We don’t have to bring in guns and bombs,” said the principal. “My assumption is that some person would have read the material and gone over it and approved it, but I don’t know in what world they could have been living.”
The books are part of a new English curriculum created by Expeditionary Learning, a non-profit arm of the group Outward Bound.
The content was commissioned by the state Education Department for grades 3 to 5 as part of New York’s unique bid to adopt a statewide curriculum.
Last month, that curriculum was recommended by the city’s Department of Education as one of two options for students in grades 3 to 5 because it aligns with new national standards known as The Common Core.
The standards emphasize using more nonfiction texts, but that has also raised questions about when students are ready to be exposed to world issues.
“If you ask me do I think guns and war are appropriate for children . . . I would say certainly not,” said Susan Neuman, chair of the Department of Learning at NYU Steinhardt. “This is likely to be too adult and too complex for them to understand meaningfully.”
Last week, the Chicago public school system deemed “Persepolis,” an autobiography about growing up in Iran, too “graphic” for the students in seventh grade, who were reading it as part of the Common Core-aligned curriculum.
New York State and City education officials emphasized that the preferred curricula are only recommendations, and that principals have the final say over what books enter the classroom.
"Some of this [Common Core] material can be emotionally charged or may use language outside of a student's particular cultural experience,” said SED spokesman Tom Dunn. “The curriculum materials are only suggested - with the decision to use them made at the local level.”
But one upstate principal, whose school spent thousands of dollars on the Expeditionary Learning books at the state's recommendation, said SED should be playing a more hands-on role in screening content.
"I think somebody at State Ed should have a responsibility to read all the books they’re recommending," he said. "I think they have to do their due diligence and take a look at it before it’s kicked out to us."


Read more:New York approves war-oriented reading textbooks for use in early grades - NYPOST.comhttp://www.nypost.com/p/news/local/scary_lesson_for_children_bO5X9X3DL645bfAireDgnM#ixzz2PEbsRc7g

optional (but recommended) article for war story project

Amy Goodman: Tomas Young and the End of the Body of War - Truthdig

Thursday, December 6, 2012

Martin Luther King, Jr.'s Letter From A Birmingham Jail

For students thinking ahead about their final exam. Here's a great link to a copy of the letter posted by the MLK Jr. Research and Education Institute at Stanford. You will also find explanatory notes attached. click here to go to the letter

Wednesday, December 5, 2012


AP English language and comp, honors English 11/12                   m crawford



1x8 (or 10) assignment.  (1 simple argument made with 8 [or 10] different rhetorical strategies)

The purpose of this assignment is to require students to demonstrate that they are familiar with and able to use effectively each rhetorical strategy listed below.

Step 1:  Using your textbook, your notes, reliable online resources,  examples from class, make sure you understand each of the rhetorical strategies listed below.  Make sure you understand them well enough that you cannot only identify them—you can make use of them.

Step 2:  Choose a simple point or simple argument you want to make.  Perhaps you want your parent(s) to allow you to adopt a dog; perhaps you are misguided enough to think that Leonardo DiCraprio is the best actor working today.* This assignment is meant to focus on the different strategies, not on the subtlety or complexity of your argument.  You are encouraged to be creative and funny.  Simple claim.  Wide range of strategies.

Step 3:  Write a single paragraph using the strategy of concern.  (Your first sample will demonstrate the use of example and will be very much like the sample page concerned with facebook)  Type this sample of your argument in a single paragraph in the format of our format guide.  The paragraph need not be an introductory paragraph; it could be a paragraph that would appear in the middle of a more complex essay.

Step 4:  Repeat step three for each of the following rhetorical strategies:

1. Illustrating Ideas by use of examples
2. Analyzing a Subject by Classification
3. Explaining by Means of Comparison
4. Using Analogy as an Expository Device
5. Explaining through Process Analysis
6. Analyzing Cause and Effect Relationships
7. Using Definition to Help Explain
8. Using Narration as an Expository Technique
(extra credit for 9 and 10)
9. Reasoning by Use of Induction
10. Reasoning by Use of Deduction

Step 5:  Identify each paragraph in terms of strategy employed and assemble the typed sample paragraphs in the order of the above list.


Step 6:  Submit your work at the beginning of the period on the date written below.


Miguel Buenaventura
AP English language and composition  
1 December 2012

Rhetorical Strategies Model

Claim:    Facebook is a waste of time.

Illustrating Ideas by Use of Example

A vulnerable young man has a few minutes of free time.  He picks up his phone and pokes at the big f app.  Here’s what he encounters:

His cousin has hung up her stockings.  She posted a photo.  Ugly stockings.  Ugly fireplace.
The ex-wife of his friend and mentor was just at Costco, shopping.  She doesn’t understand why the sample lady had so much to say about potato chips.
The guy from his favorite taqueria is very disappointed by the Chargers again.  He uses offensive language to describe his frustration.
His grandpa thinks Obama is going to take away his guns and make him live in a socialist commune with pot smoking, married, gay immigrants who just want government handouts.
A former classmate is happy that her boyfriend gave her a stuffed animal.
The son of a friend is “tired of all the haters.”
Some friend of a friend is “pinterested’ in something unbelievably stupid and would be “the happiest person in the whole world” if she could go see the new shiny vampire werewolf movie.
A middle-aged woman feels sad about a dog that had its face cut off by terrorists.  But she feels inspired by somebody who lost weight.
Lots of people like lots of stuff.   Other people don’t like doing some things.  Things like waking up.  Doing homework.  Waiting in line. Washing dishes.
Etc.

He turns off his phone.  What an efficient use of his time.  He’s learned so much about the world.

Classification

Not all facebook users are alike; there are now over 1 billion of them.  But one can classify them in terms of their use habits or their enthusiasm for posting updates.  Some users are called . . .